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8th Sep 2021, 11:39 PM in Wake up little Suzi
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Author Notes:
James Mobius
I'll admit I painted myself into a corner writing this, I realised that I'd written my female lead character being rescued by her male, albeit, robotic, co-star, and thought, oh, that's a trope, I can't have a man rescue a woman, how can I subvert this and have a woman rescue her, well, this awkward conversation resulted, and it sort of works, but it got me thinking about taking this approach intentionally, of taking cliche concepts and turning them on their ear, but maybe, planning it first next time!
User comments:
Grey Garou
Yeesh. Well, as long as it's not too complicated.
James Mobius
other than a creative writing class in high school, I am a self-taught author! I try!
Grey Garou
It wasn't meant as a knock on your writing ability, I was referring to the character explaining her motives in a convoluted and eclectic manner. I'm sure you meant it that way to give more flavor to the character and story. Believe me, I am glad to see that level of effort in character and dialogue. Too many comic writers tend to barely put a sentence in a panel.
James Mobius
ha, thanks! I wasn't offended, also I have ADD so sometimes my characters talk in convoluted ways because I do. I try to edit it so people say things in a logical order, instead of the way I speak! except Suzi, who also has ADD of course! :D